Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Sonnet

How a Hiatus Hernia Feels

If Jane carries heavy bags
She feels sharp pain
Whether she sits up
Or laying in bed
Heaviness she feels
A rock on her chest
This is called a Hiatus
    hernia
In time it gets worse
It'll be hard to breeze
That is when relief is
     found
Surgery is done
So until that time comes
Jane has to wait
For the surgery
To relieve her pain

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Mike Gentile January 11, 2018 at 12:26 PM Hi Darlene, I have one too. They say I've had it since birth. Sometimes eating is difficult. I wish you health xxoo Darlene De Beaulieu January 11, 2018 at 5:11 PM Hello Mike,you had your hernia since birth! Wow! Mine is only I have had mine since 2014. I feel the heaviness of my hernia when i lay down to sleep.I wish you good health my friend. xxx-ooo.

James Edward Lee Sr. January 10, 2018 at 7:15 PM Hi, Darlene even tho this is kind of painful and sad, it's kind of cute the way it's written. Love it. Grace, Please and Wellness unto you my friend :) James Darlene De Beaulieu January 11, 2018 at 10:57 AM Hello my friend.Yes at times it is painful. I must be careful not to lift anything too heavy because that would set it off.God Bless you my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 11, 2018 at 10:46 AM Hello my friend,I do have a hiatal hernia. Thank you.It is painful sometimes I have to be careful not to lift anything heavy. Thank you for your comment, my friend. You have a nice day.God Bless you.