How

I’m thinking about how to write the way I feel heavy in body and eye:
	quiet
	quiet
	breath
	clear
	quiet
	quiet

	There.

on writing and wordsfree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

March 28, 2013 at 9:53 PM

Jack, I'm stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

Jack Jordan

March 29, 2013 at 7:40 AM

A happy Easter to you as well... Why the sad face?

Andrea Dietrich

March 20, 2013 at 3:40 PM

interesting one!! Sometimes poetry is that way, more about the "feel" of things!

Jack Jordan

March 20, 2013 at 4:07 PM

That's absolutely true, something like "mouth feel" for wine experts. A poet friend "sees" words in color, and composes her poetry as a painter does a painting. Jack