Hovering Somewhere

Hovering somewhere
    at times alongside
    betimes even over  

  Detached
    out of sync
    removed from

  A world once so important 
    ~ mocks my very existence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:32 PM
I always go back to the 60's. A new younger generation dared to protest for change. To break away from the establishment and old established ways (At that time there needed o be change) The thing about change is you can start it but you can't stop it. So yesteryear will die a memory with our generation. Great write, GW.(son of a sage)
Hawkins Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 9:04 PM
I enjoyed reading this, Gershon.The time we remember was not so self absorbed. Simple games, simple pleaures and tastes. More compassion, closer communities and trust in each other Deals in those day's were sealed with a handshake. Some of my happiest memories are from bygone days. Your verse deseves POTD, Gerhon Take care, Shirley
Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 7:47 PM
I remember those days fondly as well, Shirley. Although I used to seal my deals with a milkshake...
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March 13, 2023 at 8:47 PM
Oh, how we laughed... Elizabeth
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