Hover

1st vs I have been a champion. I have went to school. I am not forgotten nor do I act real cool but life can be a struggle if you're walking in the rain play this party double to hide the pain 2nd vs I haven't been to jail no trouble have I caused no need for any bail no band-aid and no gauze for I have ran from silence when interrupted from it's spear I'm on navigation demilance yet anger nigh is here chorus Transformation confrontation as love is my cover Transformation no patient the angel's now do hover chorus repeat

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/7/2020 5:17:00 PM

Hello Angela … a fine lyric indeed. When reading it’s almost impossible not to start singing - well done Angela - Lindsay

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/8/2020 7:19:00 AM

Thank you, Lindsay. I originally wrote a song similar to this and later changed it to a poem. Recently, combined the two and decided to make a song again. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/5/2020 8:21:00 PM

This has the feeling of a song as I burst out into "song" and I am not a singer.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/6/2020 12:06:00 PM

Thank you, Caren. I really appreciate you reading and commenting. I wrote poetry when I was a child and later in life I started writing songs for people. Now I'm back to poetry again. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/5/2020 1:10:00 AM

This has lyrical beauty. ~~

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/5/2020 8:02:00 AM

Thank you, Victor for your beautiful comment. I originally wrote this as just a poem and recently decided to make it into a song. :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/4/2020 5:56:00 PM

May love always be your cover Angela. thank you for sharing your delightful poem.

Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/4/2020 7:17:00 PM

Thank you :) I appreciate you reading and commenting. Have a great night. Peace, Angie