Housefly From Hell

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There's a fly in the house
Buzzing around
Driving me nuts
With his buzzing sound.
I get the fly swatter
It's here in my hand
I wait and I watch for that sucker to land.
Then ever so slowly I lift my arm
Intention to pounce with a flap
Down comes the thunder
I'm swift and I'm quick
But just not as quick as all that.
I swat with a vengeance
In midflight air
He moves lickety split
First he's here, then he's there.
Don't get too comfortable
You housefly from Hell
For my house is not your place to dwell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/16/2020 1:59:00 PM
I see creativity crying aloud herein. What an amazing use of words! Much love, Adeniji.
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Date: 7/15/2020 2:17:00 PM
I have never forgotten a story I read in Playboy (many decades ago) about a man who hated flies with a passion and killed everyone he encountered until - on his death bed - he discovered that flies were really God's angels ...... Attitude makes all the difference! Aloha! Rico
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