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House On Fire

I couldn't look back, the sound still haunts me and the shadows cast across the street against the trees made by the devil's light. I couldn't look back, the heat still scorched me and bright sad faces lamented the scene made by the devil's light. I couldn't look back; sadness surrounded me, the devil burned me as I ran from my pain and forgot to take my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/15/2017 1:20:00 AM
Very intense and potent, Craig, with superb phrasing and emotional intent ... really enjoyed this write. Blessings, friend.
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Date: 11/11/2017 2:45:00 PM
DRAMA dramatically written and woven. This is compelling and I truly enjoyed it. As I type this, I still felt each stanza's impact. Definitely globally relatable. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/11/2017 9:33:00 AM
Powerful. Not sure if this is in reference to a Veteran's experience, but one could read it as such. Thank you for your poetry and your service ~ john
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