Juli- Michelle Poet Concrete

House

tri-
                                                 angle angle
                                              i am the triangle
                                           this is the shape that
                                      eventually becomes the roof
                                  triangle, triangle, triangle, triangle
                             i am a triangle, triangle, triangle, triangle
                         i am the triangular roof of the rectangle below
                            perimeter perimeter perimeter perimeter
                            e                                                       r
                            r                                                       e
                            i                                                        t
                            m               THIS IS A RECTANGLE         e
                            e                   I AM THE HOUSE             m
                            t                                              door    i
                            e                                             door    r
                            r                                              door   e
                           perimeter perimeter perimeter perimeter p
GROUNDGROUNDGROUNDGROUNDGROUNDPAVEMENTGOURNDGROUNDGROUND
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Adeyemi Joshua August 13, 2017 at 3:21 PM Thoughtful!

Mayank Kumar August 12, 2017 at 10:51 PM You combined the visual art to the poem, making it a masterpiece. congratulations.

Jared Pickett March 19, 2014 at 9:42 PM This is an interesting form. Clever and well written. I suppose congratulations are in order!!Asavvy1

Carol Sunshine Brown June 15, 2012 at 11:44 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s's "Outstanding Title" contest Juli. Love, Carol

Jonas L. Rozario June 15, 2012 at 12:18 AM congrats on your win Juli.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 14, 2012 at 6:47 PM Congratulations on your winning poem!!!

Ralph Taylor June 14, 2012 at 6:28 PM Congrats, Juli. Excellent. Very clever. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2012 at 5:38 PM JULI, a wonderful congratulations with your outstanding direct poem, attached with a strong title. Can't wait for you join another one of MY contest. Take care! :-) PD

Michael J. Falotico December 5, 2011 at 3:27 PM A house of cards with much deep walls... I like the way you writel... Michael

Craig Schaber December 4, 2011 at 11:42 AM welcome to poetry soup nice poem hope to read more. Juli- Michelle January 3, 2012 at 6:22 PM thank you if you want you can look at more of peoms

Juli- Michelle December 2, 2011 at 8:46 PM OKay, So I've tried everything and the right perimeter for the house won't format right, even though on the edit screen it looks fine :( Sorry bout that =Juli-Michelle=

Sarah Seraphin November 30, 2011 at 2:27 PM * "I Love Fun Sweet Poem * My Dear Beautiful Juli-Michelle * Such A Precious Heart Would Craft Something As Adorable As This * Knock Knock Knock * Tis Your Beauty Home * My Luv, Always * Sarah." * Juli- Michelle December 2, 2011 at 8:47 PM Thank You Sarah! <3 =Juli=Michelle=