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Hourglass' Curves

How I relish the unguarded movement

Of an hourglass shaping your graceful curves,

Framed on twilight's deserted backdrop.



Three Line PoetryContest
`` From  a man's perspective
3/16/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

March 20, 2015 at 12:03 AM

Wow nette wonderful! Congrats on big win!

Tammy Reams

March 19, 2015 at 9:18 AM

Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

March 18, 2015 at 11:40 PM

Nice win Nette...PD

Skat A

March 18, 2015 at 11:09 PM

NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2015 at 1:44 PM

nicely done, nette!! Glad to see you get this top win from Debs. Congratulations.

Paul Callus

March 18, 2015 at 10:13 AM

Wow! This is a delightful way of framing graceful curves in the background of the mind! Congratulations on a most lovely and deserved win, Nette! Hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

March 18, 2015 at 9:26 AM

Graceful words Nette. Congratulations!!! :) Kim

Debbie Guzzi

March 17, 2015 at 7:46 PM

Alluring as always nette. Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

March 17, 2015 at 7:41 PM

always lovely Nette with the way you curve your poems.. :)! MAbuhay ka!! :)! weeeeee, tuloy ikaw sa Tugue this lent?//olive eloisa

Olusegun Arowolo

March 17, 2015 at 6:52 PM

Lovely piece,Nette.. Congrats on your superb win.

Kim Shaw

March 17, 2015 at 6:42 PM

Congratulations on this fine win, Nette!! Lovely, memorable imagery. Hugs, Kimberly

Barbara Gorelick

March 17, 2015 at 6:02 PM

Lovely, congrats nette. Barbara

Sandra Haight

March 17, 2015 at 6:00 PM

Wonderful imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

March 17, 2015 at 5:54 PM

dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

March 17, 2015 at 11:33 AM

If the comment I'm about to make... if I made to a french girl in france; she would blush...here in the States, a woman may call me a 'chauvinist'. Yet, I must be me......Any woman with "an hourglass curve", would definately be; 'OVERGAURDED" (*smiles*)....by me ! Inspirational write dear poet...hope it does well in the three liner ! I'm a 'terse' poet, as I'm certain you know. Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james