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HOURGLASS

HOURGLASS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ sand escapes from the hourglass of our lives— each grain a ghost the future thins to a horizon line, pale as bone-bleached shells. time shifts the shoreline— what was solid becomes sea, what was sea becomes stone. I stand ankle-deep in the receding now, watching footprints dissolve. oldest grains glow clearest: childhood sunsets, first loves, last goodbyes— all sharpened by loss, all softened by the slow grind of what remains unsaid. The hourglass whispers: “Every fall is a rising in another light.”
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Hind Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 1:11 PM
"what was solid becomes sea, what was sea becomes stone. " WOW. Another fav from me
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September 29, 2025 at 6:38 PM
wow, Paige. I count you as one of my most enthusiastic follows. Grateful for you and this fave, hugs, Sara
Poet Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 8:24 AM
It is curious what endures in our recollection, and how our perspective on the years to come evolves. An engaging piece that stimulates reflection. Beautiful and profound ~ expertly crafted
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September 29, 2025 at 6:37 PM
thank you, kind Sotto...I agree...our recollection is fascinating and evolving. Well said, sir...thanks for your visit and encouragement. TExas hugs, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 6:19 AM
Beautiful and deep ~ superbly crafted ~
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September 29, 2025 at 6:38 PM
thank you Line!
Swan Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 5:11 AM
A thought provoking write. It is strange what lasts in memory, and what changes in how we see the future. My favourite lines are, 'I stand ankle-deep/ in the receding now', because it conveys that sense of being in time, as well as looking back. I liked reading it. J :)
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September 29, 2025 at 6:38 PM
I agree...memory is a funny thing over time. I appreciate your visit today and your encouragment, hugs, Sara
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