Hourglass

Beautiful shaping ofcourse.. and how true. I won't do the maths since I believe your time here is not being judged harshly, there is always time to serve. Sending love for your continued fruitful journey. Sx

Congratulations on a beautifully executed piece!

Matthew 6:6 dear poet...fantastic write...i'm not the one who haz the strength to comment my dear Sara...yet, remember, james readz everyone's writes...yet when pushed into it, i'm going out uv my comfort zone and start talk'n to mine fellowz! Your Heavenly Father heard you sweet sara...when you're ready, just close your eyes and rest, and when He's ready, His Son will raise you, for his Father gave him that right...Anywho, my Father iz 86 and bounces around az if he be 20... he preaches door to door, drives...and entertains dozens uv grand children, he iz the father uv 10 ! much love my SoupSister ;)

Your image and shape of your poem were excellent, Sara. We're about the same age, my friend, and have some of the same thoughts I see. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

- Great thoughts and shape, Sara :) - hugs

Very creative Sara... Nicely done..

Wow, Sara, such a profound introspective poem. Your words deeply touch the heart. Really loved this shape, it's a fave.

WOW! Wonderfully introspective poem, Sara. Every word resonates through the journey of time--spurring us to reflect--as you have done so brilliantly.

This is a very evocative poem, dear Sara..You've so beautifully captured a vivid essence where the truth of our life purpose is brought to the surface and compels the readers to dive into those emotions. Nothing is actually in our hands, all we can do, is to follow those stars aligned by God and try to make every moment, worthy of living. Though sometimes, we may question if we are doing enough, but that's all life is about..Sending you many best wishes, may you create many cherishable moments.