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Hourglass

The first grain of sand, In the swirling sands of time; Seconds sift away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2009 10:24:00 AM
The sands of time, wow...
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:11:00 AM
Nice work, the seconds do sift away.
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:48:00 PM
Swirling sands of time describes it best. nice job, I'm behind on my work.
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Date: 3/23/2009 11:05:00 PM
The Sahara in a glass vial. Great work. Tyler
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Date: 3/13/2009 3:42:00 PM
Very wise words in this beautiful Senryu, Raul! Great imagery. Love, Robin
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Date: 3/13/2009 5:38:00 AM
Way too quickly. Nice. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/12/2009 2:34:00 PM
TIme chases after all of us, nice work on this senryu...Raul
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