D.W. Rodgers Poet Vogon Poetry

Hotwired

Hotwired the orgasmatron
headed out on sixty-nine
know there’s nothin up ahead
and even less behind.
Pagination, pixilation
nothing seems to work
maybe just  I’m gettin old
maybe just a jerk
off that is
gee whiz
can’t ya take a joke?
Lost in smoke
years since last toke 
days since last drink
I think.
As ya'll can see
rhyme don't agree 
with me, 
so back to blank 
slate, mate
and the cheque's 
on you.
Iambic to the core
commonman’s  snore
such a bore.
Straight from the soul
infinite whole
or is that hole,
wasn’t  this 
supposed to be 
erotica?
Never know
have to go
Now.

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Line Gauthier May 18, 2020 at 11:33 PM I like the presentation of your short lines, it gives importance to each thought ~ Well done.

Debbie Duncan June 17, 2017 at 12:50 AM Very nice write :) D.W. Rodgers June 17, 2017 at 7:37 PM Thanks Debbie

J Hamilton Gist March 22, 2017 at 8:20 PM Crafty sportsmanship there mate. D.W. Rodgers March 23, 2017 at 2:46 PM Thanks JH

Carlos Coelho March 19, 2017 at 12:28 AM Dave, I liked your poem, I was drawn in right from the first line and journeyed to the last line. Clever write and a fun read. D.W. Rodgers March 23, 2017 at 2:45 PM Thanks Carlos

Ralph Sergi March 11, 2017 at 10:12 AM Hi Dave: Very clever play on words poem. I really enjoyed this poem. MY COMPLIMENTS! D.W. Rodgers March 11, 2017 at 2:43 PM Thanks Marvin

Jannie Breedt March 11, 2017 at 3:51 AM Hoo yea! Felt like I was chewing gum as I went along skipping through this one. Brutal honesty and nice and naughty too. Loved it.

Marvin Whitfield March 10, 2017 at 9:53 PM This poem has lots of humor in it. A warm personality with feelings. Very clever!

Carolyn Fish January 5, 2017 at 9:24 AM Yes! D.W. Rodgers January 5, 2017 at 12:38 PM Thanks for dropping by

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 12, 2016 at 10:25 AM Oh, Dave. You got the old lion laughing w/this wonderful poem. Great write, I'm sure every Vogon is proud of their adopted son. Love this poem though. Love and peace from the RW (Romantic Warrior.) D.W. Rodgers November 14, 2016 at 9:49 AM Thanks Freddie

Scott Thirtyseven August 25, 2015 at 8:01 AM Well I'm in a spin. Great work, I think I want to play with this form myself. Thanks for the intro. D.W. Rodgers August 25, 2015 at 10:36 PM Thanks Scot, always good to play with different forms

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 8:26 PM thank you for the comment on my comment...PD

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2014 at 1:09 PM Aberfoyle.. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog ENCORE" if you'd like. Always & Forever <3 LINDA ;-) D.W. Rodgers May 22, 2014 at 8:14 PM Thanks Linda,

Shadow Hamilton May 18, 2014 at 10:37 AM clever write Dave not a style I am know looks interesting though ty for visiting my page hugs D.W. Rodgers May 18, 2014 at 6:08 PM Thanks Shadow, not sure its my style either but sometimes fun to play. Cheers Dave