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Hotwired

Hotwired the orgasmatron
headed out on sixty-nine
know there’s nothin up ahead
and even less behind.
Pagination, pixilation
nothing seems to work
maybe just  I’m gettin old
maybe just a jerk
off that is
gee whiz
can’t ya take a joke?
Lost in smoke
years since last toke 
days since last drink
I think.
As ya'll can see
rhyme don't agree 
with me, 
so back to blank 
slate, mate
and the cheque's 
on you.
Iambic to the core
commonman’s  snore
such a bore.
Straight from the soul
infinite whole
or is that hole,
wasn’t  this 
supposed to be 
erotica?
Never know
have to go
Now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/18/2020 11:33:00 PM
I like the presentation of your short lines, it gives importance to each thought ~ Well done.
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Date: 6/17/2017 12:50:00 AM
Very nice write :)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 6/17/2017 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Debbie
Date: 3/22/2017 8:20:00 PM
Crafty sportsmanship there mate.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/23/2017 2:46:00 PM
Thanks JH
Date: 3/19/2017 12:28:00 AM
Dave, I liked your poem, I was drawn in right from the first line and journeyed to the last line. Clever write and a fun read.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/23/2017 2:45:00 PM
Thanks Carlos
Date: 3/11/2017 10:12:00 AM
Hi Dave: Very clever play on words poem. I really enjoyed this poem. MY COMPLIMENTS!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 3/11/2017 2:43:00 PM
Thanks Marvin
Date: 3/11/2017 3:51:00 AM
Hoo yea! Felt like I was chewing gum as I went along skipping through this one. Brutal honesty and nice and naughty too. Loved it.
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Date: 3/10/2017 9:53:00 PM
This poem has lots of humor in it. A warm personality with feelings. Very clever!
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Date: 1/5/2017 9:24:00 AM
Yes!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 1/5/2017 12:38:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by
Date: 11/12/2016 10:25:00 AM
Oh, Dave. You got the old lion laughing w/this wonderful poem. Great write, I'm sure every Vogon is proud of their adopted son. Love this poem though. Love and peace from the RW (Romantic Warrior.)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/14/2016 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Freddie
Date: 8/25/2015 8:01:00 AM
Well I'm in a spin. Great work, I think I want to play with this form myself. Thanks for the intro.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 8/25/2015 10:36:00 PM
Thanks Scot, always good to play with different forms
Date: 5/22/2014 8:26:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my comment...PD
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Date: 5/22/2014 1:09:00 PM
Aberfoyle.. Thank you for supporting one of my latest contest. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog ENCORE" if you'd like. Always & Forever <3 LINDA ;-)
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/22/2014 8:14:00 PM
Thanks Linda,
Date: 5/18/2014 10:37:00 AM
clever write Dave not a style I am know looks interesting though ty for visiting my page hugs
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 5/18/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, not sure its my style either but sometimes fun to play. Cheers Dave

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