Hotter Then Any Furnace

The moonlight illuminates the snow ---
Crystals sparkel like very precious gems ---
As I trod upon the ground, each step echoes ---
Steam is coming from my silent mouth ---
Even though I am bathed completely in cold sweat ---
My heart for God, burns hotter then any furnace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mitchell Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 7:40 PM
Beautiful!
Marszalowicz Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 6:09 PM
you have a great idea here fighting through the cold wilderness with spirit. Is god the only one that lights your fire?
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Sheol, this is how I like to see people writing about God and their love of Him, with great imagery like you've shown us here. I think this is my favorite of yours I've seen yet. LUv, andrea
Anish Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 11:07 AM
What a piece of mysticical writing! Nice work! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Your beautiful faith is pleasing to God, Sheol! This verse says it all! Thank you for reading and leaving a comment on my poem! Peace, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:38 AM
You have penned your faith very elegantly. Very descriptive and expressive write. Keep the faith pen flowing. Sara
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