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Hotshot Pilot

Hotshot Pilot Did loop Oh, poop! Flamed out No doubt! He bailed Chute failed! Bad chute Oh, shoot! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired

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Date: 11/6/2016 9:17:00 PM
Great footle!!! :)
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Date: 11/6/2016 7:04:00 PM
CUTE String!
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Date: 11/6/2016 5:03:00 PM
OOPS! Great string of footles Robert:-) hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/6/2016 7:32:00 PM
lol
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 11/6/2016 5:56:00 PM
I wish in the last line I could have said Oh, sh-t (which most pilots in that situation would say) but couldn't find anything to rhyme properly - ha!