Hotshot Pilot

Hotshot 
Pilot

Did loop
Oh, poop!

Flamed out
No doubt!

He bailed
Chute failed!

Bad chute
Oh, shoot!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vaso Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Great footle!!! :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 7:04 PM
CUTE String!
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 5:03 PM
OOPS! Great string of footles Robert:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 7:32 PM
lol
Hinshaw Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 5:56 PM
I wish in the last line I could have said Oh, sh-t (which most pilots in that situation would say) but couldn't find anything to rhyme properly - ha!
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