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Hotel Room Next Door

Hotel room next door
Headboard to wall symphony....
Fireworks starting soon

© May 10 2010 Charles Henderson

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Carrie Richards

May 27, 2010 at 8:10 AM

I have to laugh!! This reminds me of a camping trip we took to the Grand Canyon....only instead of a headboard...it was the "ooooo's and ahhhhh's coming from the next campsite (we were tent camping at the time!!!) We covered our children's ears!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

May 26, 2010 at 10:29 PM

Very witty, Charles! Joe's right -- it does remind me of the Lincoln Duncan song, but only because he mentioned. Your senryu's humor stands on its own. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

May 26, 2010 at 10:26 PM

That is a real fun one! LUv, andrea

Poet Destroyer A

May 26, 2010 at 9:59 PM

funny one, nice

Joe Flach

May 26, 2010 at 9:56 PM

I like this Charles. This reminds me of the start to one of my favorite Paul Simon songs which hardly anyone knows about, called "Lincoln Duncan": "Couple in the next room // Bound to win a prize // They've been going at it all night long // I'm trying to get some sleep // But these motel walls are cheap // Lincoln Duncan is my name // And here's my song...

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