Hotel Room Next Door

Hotel room next door Headboard to wall symphony.... Fireworks starting soon © May 10 2010 Charles Henderson

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Carrie Richards

Date: 5/27/2010 8:10:00 AM

I have to laugh!! This reminds me of a camping trip we took to the Grand Canyon....only instead of a headboard...it was the "ooooo's and ahhhhh's coming from the next campsite (we were tent camping at the time!!!) We covered our children's ears!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2010 10:29:00 PM

Very witty, Charles! Joe's right -- it does remind me of the Lincoln Duncan song, but only because he mentioned. Your senryu's humor stands on its own. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2010 10:26:00 PM

That is a real fun one! LUv, andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2010 9:59:00 PM

funny one, nice

Joe Flach

Date: 5/26/2010 9:56:00 PM

I like this Charles. This reminds me of the start to one of my favorite Paul Simon songs which hardly anyone knows about, called "Lincoln Duncan": "Couple in the next room // Bound to win a prize // They've been going at it all night long // I'm trying to get some sleep // But these motel walls are cheap // Lincoln Duncan is my name // And here's my song...