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Hotdogs

Sometimes I fell like a hot dog trapped inside a bun I need several supports around me just to be good I can't relish the good times whenever they come My past plays ketchup no matter how fast I run I can't ever find the strength that must be mustard I find it hard to escape the never-ending cluster So when my friends ask me "What is wrong" I simply smile and reply "Do you know what's in a hot dog?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/28/2011 7:51:00 AM
I'm really likin' it. Tony
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Date: 9/28/2011 7:36:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Marshall. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:02:00 PM
Interesting and creatively put. This is a unique style you have. Keep writing. - James
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