Hot Trash

The queen of rubbish raised her man’s ire By not calling the king of trash, sire She just refused His ‘Royal Refuse’ So he raged into a dumpster fire For Dumpster Fire Contest

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/14/2025 1:07:00 PM

David, too funny. Smiles!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2025 7:31:00 PM

Ha. May he burn in heck!!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/5/2025 9:09:00 PM

Lol. A clever play on words.

David Fisher
Date: 2/6/2025 5:28:00 PM

Thanks Hilda-I've been looking for your next write.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/3/2025 9:33:00 PM

Pretty good, David. Looks like a winner to me. ~ Hump T. Dump-sire

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/3/2025 6:48:00 PM

Dearest David! Hot poem, and a sizzling enttry Pangie xxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/1/2025 1:06:00 PM

I thought of that old song by Peggy Lee,“ you Give Me Fever”. That was in the 60’s I think. Apologies for the typo, my specialty! I spelled entry with two “t’s” and just corrected it.Pangie x Pangie xx

David Fisher
Date: 2/6/2025 5:40:00 PM

Thanks Pangie, there's heat anywhere if we look for it.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/2/2025 3:59:00 PM

Love the humour in the Lim David… Beryl

David Fisher
Date: 2/6/2025 5:41:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words, Beryl!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/2/2025 3:45:00 PM

ha ha ha this is very clever David! hugs jan xx