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Hot Tar

In the hot sand I walk seeking traces of you that were left being last night as i played the part and sought the role while coming undone Mentally, physically yet emotionally stable Suprising you stunning me in the rising sun You glare remembering all the anger that's always there I beg and plea for you to overlook all the small things when I'm hitting my feet on hot tar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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