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Hot Summer's Day

I hear chirping birds before rainfall On a hot summer’s day Humidity is thick, like a wall Relief is a raindrop away Tints of green in leaves so still Ready to dance and play The bird bath is waiting for re-fill Again, this hot summer’s day Energy lacking, but I have a will To let go in the rain on my way To the next place I belong In this shelter, I cannot stay There’s no room left to be wrong Heidi Sands 7/19/22

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Date: 7/19/2022 12:25:00 PM
Wonderfully painted the hot and humid day--awaiting relief of rainfall. Enjoyed the voice of your descriptive poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/19/2022 12:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay. I hope you are having a nice day :)
Date: 7/19/2022 11:56:00 AM
The moments when a summer storm is building through the heat broken by a rainstorm are perfectly and lyrically painted. This is so relatable Heidi. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings sent on cooling wings!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/19/2022 12:55:00 PM
Yes lots of humidity lately. Thank you for your kind comment Sam :)

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