Hot Summer Night

Steamy summer love made our set.
Hot summer night, when we first met.
I kissed her neck; she looked in my eyes.
Drunk in mind and heart, to our surprise,
She took my hand; we kissed our first kiss.
I knew then, that night, it would be no miss.
Upon the sandy beach, we gazed at the stars.
Our night impressed by the red planet, Mars
Hours turned to morning daze, what a craze.
Dawn grew our blaze, a new day to praise.
Summer love was what we were adorning.
Our blend would rise above any adjourning.
Sweeter love then candy, glistening so sandy,
Summer love dandy, I love my darling Brandy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 14, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Very romantic poem, Cecil. Passion can make us feel "drunk in mind and heart." Enjoyed the story behind the poem as well as the great flow and rhyme scheme. Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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July 14, 2010 at 9:39 AM
I am smiling because of all the wonderful poetry I am reading this morning. Thank you for sharing yours Cecil and know that others will draw inspiration from it when they read it. Love, Carol
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July 13, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Cecil if this is for MY contest.. the form is wrong.. its RHYME ONLY for the MEN and Sonnet for the Ladies.. my friend.. with luv..
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