Notes About The Poem

Hot Summer Day

It's not a swimming pool
still feels so cool,
it's not even a pond
still feels so grand!

On a hot summer day
children at play
dipping their toes
where the hydrant flows,
looking so hip
ready to take a dip,
posing to jump
in the murky dump.

Having some fun
under the hot summer sun
kids of the neighborhood
immersed in childhood
in a make-believe pool
a site not so cool.

A man in a suit
needs to reboot, 
a man rolling sleeves 
looking for relief,
the awful summer heat
burning under feet.

By the repair shop
the pedestrians stop,
as kids smile and laugh,
blow bubbles, and chaff.

The grown-ups gaze
in a quiet daze,
don't see the lure,
don't feel so sure,
it's a construction site 
full of blight!

Not much activity,
the street looks empty,
so much humidity,
air quite sweaty, 
time for some relief,
time to go knee deep.

August 31, 2017
Placed 1st: Brian's Choice 8 Contest by Brian Strand
Placed 4th: Hot Summer Day
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 7:48 PM
Wow.... this gives so much of relief on a sultry summer day. You have made it sound so real with wonderful flow of words and feelings as the water that flows under the feet of the children here. The images too are so lively. This goes into my FAVE.
Kauffman Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 12:07 AM
Hot time - summer in the city - so wonderfully described in this winning entry! Congratulations Vijay!
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2020 at 4:58 PM
could not find anything to click on but then I happened on this oldie, which I also had commented to, but one thing I never did was say CONGRATULATIOINS. and a very belated one at that. How time flew since that contest!!
Webster Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:37 PM
congratulations, vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Thank you Jack!
Sands Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:51 PM
Congratulations Vijay :)
Pandit Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 3:53 PM
Thanks Heidi!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 12:57 AM
Congratulations, Vijay on your placement.
Pandit Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Subimal!
Roper Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Thank you, Vijay , for entering my contest. .... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:41 PM
Thank you Eve!
Swartz Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 1:28 PM
I always miss summer when the temperature drops. This reminds me of all the good times I've had in those hot months. Great flow and imagery Vijay. This is a great piece.
Pandit Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 3:07 PM
Thank you James for your lovely feedback.
Warrior Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:03 AM
I'm swimming in your cool Vijay lol...best of luck my friend...god bless...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thank you WW for your lovely comments!
Smith Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Kids will find respite where they can find it... terrific Vijay
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 9:57 AM
Thank you Tim!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 7:39 AM
Delightfully written! It brings the summer in every heart! Excellently done ! Good luck my friend, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thank you Demetrios for your lovely comments!
Sivey Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 4:50 AM
This is a contest right? I have seen several Hot Summer Day poems. This is a nice poem Vijay. I liked it. Russell says, "I loved your incredible write this morning my friend. You have delighted me to no end by this wondrous poem Vijay. This is such a remarkable piece, filled with summer fun. I have seen several poem for this contest, yours might be the best I've heard so far. What a harmonious poem, great work." Emma :)
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:31 AM
Love your comments as always, Russell--you always bring smile to everyone. Thank you Emma for taking the time to write and read poems to Russell!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:52 PM
I love this, Vijay .Way to get inspired with the poetry theme.
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Thank you Andrea for your lovely comments!
Sands Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:39 PM
Hi Vijay, No I didn't see the poem of the day.
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:46 PM
Glad you saw it now!
Ashley Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Awesome write Vijay! Your last stanza especially, is amazing. Excellent flow and rhyme, I could feel the heat in the city! I really enjoyed reading your poem this evening :)
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Thanks Susan..lovely feedback!
Sands Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Wow Vijay, that sure does describe a hot summer day! Well done ! Good luck in the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Thanks Heidi. Did you see the POTD today?
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