Another "Lawless" Sonnet....also known as "writing outside the lines"
The leaves seem to be smirking Gently giggling in the dropping dew Egging on the sting of a rising sun Sheltering the empty bird feeder Sad roses weep dewdrop tears Summer’s shadows hints of fall Garden sprinklers defy the water ban Hawk’s struggle in the silent air August will challenge the ripening fruit She will throw down the gauntlet Challenge the pumpkins of October As lovers stroll along the beach The moon will offer a subtle kindness The soothing cool of the sun’s goodnight
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