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Hot In L.A. . Hot in L.A Where the girls are so pretty And the sun smiles down all day Three friends on holiday Take to the road and ride Far away from the hustle and bustle They head cheerfully for the countryside With the wind streaming their hair Each a peach The boys whistle and stop to stare So young so alive and free Time is on their side And budding movie stars they dream to be Singing and laughing as they go On their merry way Waving to people they don’t know They all met at collage and were cheerleaders for a spell They shared their secrets And their kiss and tell This was just before Pearl harbour And just before the war All three were nurses In the army core Bonded as sisters they stuck together through thick and thin For almost sixty years And old age settled in But still have their cheeky girlish charm and fun Still at heart Forever young. . Peter Dome©2020.

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Date: 12/24/2020 5:22:00 PM
A lovely poem Peter three friends and remaining friends all their lives, still get together for a chat even after sixty years. Time seems to have stood still for them. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer,
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/26/2020 2:54:00 AM
Hi Jennifer. always a pleasure. Hope you are well my friend. Thank you so much. Take care. Best wishes.. Pete.

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