Hot (Etheree)

HOT! (Etheree)

Day
Saturday
April 3, 
Sun is scorching!
The birds are silent
Not a cloud in the sky
Nor a gentle breeze blowing
It is unseasonably      HOT!
The weatherman promises melt
Guess what I’ll ask God to do for Easter?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 4:26 AM
we had 90 on Easter which is unseasonal, in GA
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April 5, 2010 at 4:05 PM
Wow! That hot in April. It's crazy. Creative way to share this information. Keep on writing! Thank you for taking time to comment on my haiku. Karen
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 8:01 AM
May our Lord bless you and yours on this Easter Day Daver. Love Carol and Family
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 6:59 PM
Hey, daver, I did some weather reports in etheree like this one too. It's so true what they say about great minds! soupmail.
Haick Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Send some soft rain to cool the earth?? I emphatize, daver! Have a blessed Easter, my friend....Peace, love, Audrey
Dufresne Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Well done Etheree and a natural enjoyable write, Daver. Happy Easter my friend. Robert
Richards Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 12:30 PM
No happy medium, it seems!! We are heading into a soggy, wet Easter! But yes...it is too soon for 95 degrees....for us that will happen in May....usually happens overnight!! Happy Easter....(fried egg sandwiches perhaps??)
A  Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 10:51 AM
A COOL BREEZE PERHAPS... ENJOYED... HOPE YOU HAVE A HAPPY EASTER SUNDAY WEEKEND
Murphy Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 9:42 AM
To cool it down a little nice writw happy easter faleshia
Devonshire Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 8:28 AM
I think you'll be asking the weatherman to give you some pleasant spring weather. What's going on with this weather? It's a beautiful spring day in Florida and it's going to be 95 degrees in Michigan? I think our North Pole is in the process of shifting. Scientists say this is the time it should be doing that. Just tried to call you, Daver, and left a message. Love, Carolyn (I'll try again in a moment)
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