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Hot Breath

Hot Breath
excited crowd waits impatiently earthquakes shake the ground lava heated boiling water pushes towards the surface hot steam spews from the vent anticipation grows, ready for the eruption a mighty whoosh and the vented steam reaches for the blue sky for a duration of ninety seconds the crowd is awed by natures power with a gurgle the steam cloud settles back into the earth to await another cycle
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Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 7:58 PM
Amazing, esp. in the snow! Thanks, gw
Mckeithan Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 1:33 AM
My wife and I went to Yellowstone once and saw the geysers. Not in the winter though. Still impressive. Thanks Gershon
Bauer Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:44 PM
you've described this so well, oliver! it really is amazing to watch...
Mckeithan Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:45 PM
It is. I have been to Yellowstone and have seen the geysers. Nit sure if this particular picture is from there. Thanks for your comments Ilene.
Cunningham Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:08 PM
An amazing spectacle Oliver, is that Yellowstone by any chance? Tom
Mckeithan Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 1:19 PM
Thanks Tom. I dont know. There is no place listed on the picture. My wife and I have been to Yellowstone and saw several geysers. Could well be Y-Stone.
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