Hot Bagels

Bagels as hot as pancakes
for a quick breakfast;
I breathe in their tempting smell
and get excited:
happy as a kid,
I munch on
one!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 9:31 AM
Andrew, I can't resist those bagels either. Whether eaten plain, with butter or topped by cream cheese, this is one of my favorite foods and your poem definitely made my hungry for one. Great job! Best wishe in John's contest. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 10:52 AM
delicious treat, andrew... nice one!! :) hugggs, nette
Onclaud Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 10:51 AM
delicious treat, andrew... nice one!! :) hugggs, nette
Brown Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 10:46 AM
As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such wonderful poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Andrew. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 6:38 AM
Nice yummy dish, Andrew
Sweetheart Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 5:42 AM
Yummy delight Andrew.. good luck in the contest my friend.. enjoy a happy weekend with luv to... u sure gave the bagel a great personality luv..
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 12:18 AM
Great description of those bagels, Andrew!! How are you doing?
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