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Hot And Cold Flashes

The Sun’s fire rises, raising temperatures’s smile; A tug of war dance; Palm tree afternoon, humidity’s peak level; Thermometer breaks; Healed by a sunset, taking you back to the ground; Rain colors your back; Stretched to the limit trying to break the fever: In the end? Chilled out; Hot and cold flashes of the Dirty South.

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Date: 3/11/2024 12:38:00 PM
Love that last line! Great ending!
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 3/11/2024 2:35:00 PM
Thank you so much .. Tried to capture the weather down here..Blessings.

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