Alexis Y. Poet Diamante

Hot and Cold

Hot
                 sunny, heat
      scorching, burning, sizzling 
  Flames, lava ,frozen, antifreeze 
      snowing, freezing, hailing
                Ice, cool, chill
                       Cold








* This poem was inspired by L. Milton. He excels
in the form; I saw his amazing poems in the 
Diamante form and decided to give it a go.


Alexis Y.
04-28-2021

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Jennifer Proxenos April 30, 2021 at 10:29 AM You did more than give it a go, you created a unique Diamante, well penned my friend. Stay well and your pen flowing. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick April 30, 2021 at 3:45 AM Describes some people doesn't it. LOL..I enjoyed reading this very descriptive work. Your visits to my page always adds a special touch to my reviews. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis April 29, 2021 at 7:09 AM Impressive Diamante, dearest Alexis. Hugs xxx

Harry Horsman April 28, 2021 at 10:39 PM Love the form, Alexis and the poetry, Your words fit the form so well.

Victor Buhagiar April 28, 2021 at 10:18 PM A well composed diamante. Perfect contrast.

L Milton Hankins April 28, 2021 at 7:50 PM Ah, thanks, Alexis. Sweet of you. Your diamante has a problem in the fourth line. The first two words of the line should relate to "Hot," and the last two words should relate to "Cold." You can easily fix this. Wonderful! I am so glad you gave it a go! I hope you will fix the glitch and enter it in Caren's contest. L Milton Hankins April 29, 2021 at 8:59 PM Wonderful! Super job, Alexis. This is a really good one. I am jealous! Alexis Y. April 28, 2021 at 7:54 PM Hi L. Milton, Thank you so much for letting me know. I fix it now. Thanks, you inspired it.

Robert Pettit April 28, 2021 at 5:22 PM Is this for Caren's Spring or Summer diamante contest? If so, it looks like something that will impress Caren.

Vijay Pandit April 28, 2021 at 2:12 PM Beautifully done my friend--like the way you transitioned your imagery--hot to cold.

Robert L. Hinshaw April 28, 2021 at 2:05 PM You describe so well the weather here lately in Colorado in this wonderful Diamante - ha! Bob H