Hot and Cold

Hot sunny, heat scorching, burning, sizzling Flames, lava ,frozen, antifreeze snowing, freezing, hailing Ice, cool, chill Cold * This poem was inspired by L. Milton. He excels in the form; I saw his amazing poems in the Diamante form and decided to give it a go. Alexis Y. 04-28-2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/30/2021 10:29:00 AM

You did more than give it a go, you created a unique Diamante, well penned my friend. Stay well and your pen flowing. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/30/2021 3:45:00 AM

Describes some people doesn't it. LOL..I enjoyed reading this very descriptive work. Your visits to my page always adds a special touch to my reviews. Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/29/2021 7:09:00 AM

Impressive Diamante, dearest Alexis. Hugs xxx

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/28/2021 10:39:00 PM

Love the form, Alexis and the poetry, Your words fit the form so well.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/28/2021 10:18:00 PM

A well composed diamante. Perfect contrast.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/28/2021 7:50:00 PM

Ah, thanks, Alexis. Sweet of you. Your diamante has a problem in the fourth line. The first two words of the line should relate to "Hot," and the last two words should relate to "Cold." You can easily fix this. Wonderful! I am so glad you gave it a go! I hope you will fix the glitch and enter it in Caren's contest.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/29/2021 8:59:00 PM

Wonderful! Super job, Alexis. This is a really good one. I am jealous!

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/28/2021 7:54:00 PM

Hi L. Milton, Thank you so much for letting me know. I fix it now. Thanks, you inspired it.

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/28/2021 5:22:00 PM

Is this for Caren's Spring or Summer diamante contest? If so, it looks like something that will impress Caren.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/28/2021 2:12:00 PM

Beautifully done my friend--like the way you transitioned your imagery--hot to cold.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 4/28/2021 2:05:00 PM

You describe so well the weather here lately in Colorado in this wonderful Diamante - ha! Bob H