Kim Rodrigues Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Hot Air Balloon

hot air balloon lifts
off the ground, there goes
great debate below
seeming solid ground
a noxious odor

but way up here
the air is clear
the birds fly by
and so do i

ballooning
is such fun
join me, you

dream big
seize day

light

1/7/2021
Contest: A Diminished Hexaverse
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
5/4/3/2/1 in syllables and lines
checked by HMS

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Paula Goldsmith January 23, 2021 at 11:37 AM Congratulations on your win. I love watching hot air balloons, they are pretty like your write. I would not want to ride in one. Have a blessed day..................

Sam Kauffman January 23, 2021 at 9:56 AM Really wonderful Kim! Congratulations on your win! Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2021 at 10:28 AM Thank you, Sam!

JC Brul January 23, 2021 at 3:27 AM Congratulations..More blessings.. Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2021 at 10:28 AM Thank you, JCB!

Beata Agustin January 23, 2021 at 3:13 AM Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2021 at 10:28 AM God bless you too, Beata! Thank you!

Eve Roper January 22, 2021 at 7:20 PM Back with congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2021 at 7:39 PM Thank you, Eve!

Alexis Y. January 22, 2021 at 7:11 PM WoW! Kim, I enjoyed the positivity in this write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening:-) Alexis Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2021 at 7:41 PM Thank you, Alexis!

Janice Canerdy January 22, 2021 at 3:20 PM BIG congrats on your well-deserved win, Kim. I may add an item to my bucket list! Janice Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2021 at 4:35 PM Thank you! Fly high!

Darlene De Beaulieu January 8, 2021 at 11:48 AM Hello Kim, oh-no- I would never go on the Balloon ride. I have seen some stuck in the trees. It is not for me. Hugs Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu January 8, 2021 at 3:57 PM LOL Kim,I will fly with you metaphorically. Lets go! Enjoy your evening my friend.Enjoy your evening my friend. Kim Rodrigues January 8, 2021 at 1:32 PM LOL, metaphorically fly with me! Bless you!

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2021 at 3:59 PM these are so fun to write and to read what comes to peoples' mind!! Awesome, Kim Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 4:34 PM Thank you, Andrea! I figured we all could use a lift!

Vijay Pandit January 7, 2021 at 12:27 PM Beautiful view from your balloon ride, Kim--verse of joy, high up in sky! Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 4:34 PM Way way up! Thank you, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2021 at 11:01 AM - I've always wanted to fly in a hot air balloon ... it's still on my wish list - A lovely poem, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 4:37 PM Would be fun! Indeed exciting! Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 4:34 PM Would be fun! Indeed exciting!

Eve Roper January 7, 2021 at 10:44 AM Well done, Kim, they are beautiful hovering over the earth. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 4:35 PM Thank you, Eve! Truly!

Victor Buhagiar January 7, 2021 at 9:30 AM Never been on one, but I guess it would be exhilarating. ~~ Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 10:36 AM I would think so!

J. Summers January 7, 2021 at 9:08 AM Loved the poem. I was lucky enough to go ballooning while living in New Mexico...what a great experince. Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 10:36 AM I bet it was!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 7, 2021 at 8:18 AM Count me in!!! ~x Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 10:36 AM Yay!

Jan Allison January 7, 2021 at 6:22 AM It looks fun Kim but I am keeping my feet on solid ground!:-) hugs jan xx Kim Rodrigues January 7, 2021 at 10:36 AM Metaphorically, dear Jan! Take my hand! :)