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Hot Air Balloon

hot air balloon lifts off the ground, there goes great debate below seeming solid ground a noxious odor but way up here the air is clear the birds fly by and so do i ballooning is such fun join me, you dream big seize day light 1/7/2021 Contest: A Diminished Hexaverse Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger 5/4/3/2/1 in syllables and lines checked by HMS

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/23/2021 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love watching hot air balloons, they are pretty like your write. I would not want to ride in one. Have a blessed day..................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/23/2021 9:56:00 AM

Really wonderful Kim! Congratulations on your win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, Sam!

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/23/2021 3:27:00 AM

Congratulations..More blessings..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thank you, JCB!

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/23/2021 3:13:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2021 10:28:00 AM

God bless you too, Beata! Thank you!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/22/2021 7:20:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/22/2021 7:11:00 PM

WoW! Kim, I enjoyed the positivity in this write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 7:41:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/22/2021 3:20:00 PM

BIG congrats on your well-deserved win, Kim. I may add an item to my bucket list! Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2021 4:35:00 PM

Thank you! Fly high!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/8/2021 11:48:00 AM

Hello Kim, oh-no- I would never go on the Balloon ride. I have seen some stuck in the trees. It is not for me. Hugs Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2021 3:57:00 PM

LOL Kim,I will fly with you metaphorically. Lets go! Enjoy your evening my friend.Enjoy your evening my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2021 1:32:00 PM

LOL, metaphorically fly with me! Bless you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2021 3:59:00 PM

these are so fun to write and to read what comes to peoples' mind!! Awesome, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2021 4:34:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I figured we all could use a lift!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/7/2021 12:27:00 PM

Beautiful view from your balloon ride, Kim--verse of joy, high up in sky!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2021 4:34:00 PM

Way way up! Thank you, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2021 11:01:00 AM

- I've always wanted to fly in a hot air balloon ... it's still on my wish list - A lovely poem, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2021 4:37:00 PM

Would be fun! Indeed exciting!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2021 4:34:00 PM

Would be fun! Indeed exciting!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/7/2021 10:44:00 AM

Well done, Kim, they are beautiful hovering over the earth. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2021 4:35:00 PM

Thank you, Eve! Truly!