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Hot Air Balloon

hot air balloon lifts
off the ground, there goes
great debate below
seeming solid ground
a noxious odor

but way up here
the air is clear
the birds fly by
and so do i

ballooning
is such fun
join me, you

dream big
seize day

light

1/7/2021
Contest: A Diminished Hexaverse
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
5/4/3/2/1 in syllables and lines
checked by HMS

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2021

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/23/2021 11:37:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I love watching hot air balloons, they are pretty like your write. I would not want to ride in one. Have a blessed day.................. Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 1/23/2021 9:56:00 AM Really wonderful Kim! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2021 10:28:00 AM Thank you, Sam!

JCB Brul Date: 1/23/2021 3:27:00 AM Congratulations..More blessings.. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2021 10:28:00 AM Thank you, JCB!

Beata Agustin Date: 1/23/2021 3:13:00 AM Wow! Congrats! God bless you. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2021 10:28:00 AM God bless you too, Beata! Thank you!

Eve Roper Date: 1/22/2021 7:20:00 PM Back with congratulations on your winning write. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/22/2021 7:39:00 PM Thank you, Eve!

Alexis Y. Date: 1/22/2021 7:11:00 PM WoW! Kim, I enjoyed the positivity in this write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great evening:-) Alexis Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/22/2021 7:41:00 PM Thank you, Alexis!

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/22/2021 3:20:00 PM BIG congrats on your well-deserved win, Kim. I may add an item to my bucket list! Janice Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/22/2021 4:35:00 PM Thank you! Fly high!

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/8/2021 11:48:00 AM Hello Kim, oh-no- I would never go on the Balloon ride. I have seen some stuck in the trees. It is not for me. Hugs Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/8/2021 3:57:00 PM LOL Kim,I will fly with you metaphorically. Lets go! Enjoy your evening my friend.Enjoy your evening my friend. Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/8/2021 1:32:00 PM LOL, metaphorically fly with me! Bless you!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/7/2021 3:59:00 PM these are so fun to write and to read what comes to peoples' mind!! Awesome, Kim Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 4:34:00 PM Thank you, Andrea! I figured we all could use a lift!

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/7/2021 12:27:00 PM Beautiful view from your balloon ride, Kim--verse of joy, high up in sky! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 4:34:00 PM Way way up! Thank you, Vijay!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/7/2021 11:01:00 AM - I've always wanted to fly in a hot air balloon ... it's still on my wish list - A lovely poem, Kim - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 4:37:00 PM Would be fun! Indeed exciting! Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 4:34:00 PM Would be fun! Indeed exciting!

Eve Roper Date: 1/7/2021 10:44:00 AM Well done, Kim, they are beautiful hovering over the earth. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 4:35:00 PM Thank you, Eve! Truly!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/7/2021 9:30:00 AM Never been on one, but I guess it would be exhilarating. ~~ Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 10:36:00 AM I would think so!

J. Summers Date: 1/7/2021 9:08:00 AM Loved the poem. I was lucky enough to go ballooning while living in New Mexico...what a great experince. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 10:36:00 AM I bet it was!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 1/7/2021 8:18:00 AM Count me in!!! ~x Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 10:36:00 AM Yay!

Jan Allison Date: 1/7/2021 6:22:00 AM It looks fun Kim but I am keeping my feet on solid ground!:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/7/2021 10:36:00 AM Metaphorically, dear Jan! Take my hand! :)