Hot

Staring across 
a distant horizon
Into the setting sun 
Holding hands 
Blazing beauty 

Hotly sizzling flames 
Eyes melt the soul 
Capturing beautiful 
In flickering feelings 

It radiates warm 
In deep happiness 
A spark 
picked up ignites 

Blazing emotions 
Desire electrically charged 
I see before me 
A work of art 

In a masterpiece 
Craving more 
To be 
Alight 

Completely 
on 
fire

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:34 PM
This beauty describes the enticing deep feeling towards someone with captivating eyes.Eyes are the mirror of heart and soul..So i bet there s more than eyes capturing your pulse rate.Sensusl and inspiring
Mcdaid Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 3:34 AM
the pulse is barely moving ha ha thank you ever so sweetly for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Chircop Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:35 PM
sensual i meant..oops : )typo
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 1:05 PM
...........hot......open up the window....lol ! - Well done, Liam ! - oxox // Anne-Lise ;)
Mcdaid Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 1:07 PM
thank you kindly for the sweet and beautiful comment deeply appreciated
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