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Hostile Head Takeover Part 2

A din ensued
my imaginary brood
with a good dose of misapprehension
hauled out their toys
and with a deafening noise
held band practice to demand my attention


My head resounded
I was astounded
as my voices insisted space be freed
then took up position
for a spit competition
unless their demand I would heed

"Spit all you may
I refuse to be swayed
back to your cupboard, skeleton folk
all was well hitherto
with my self-made crew
till my head friends you chose to provoke."


"Dear host, you're unfeeling
to your good sense we're appealing
repeal the bones' non grata status
or your imaginary crew
will hold a coup
assisted by our posse comitatus." 

"Skeletons and friends
your logic transcends
admittedly you've much courage and clout
I'll have to engage
with our very own sage
the inimitable Shadow of Doubt.

"After due consultation 
and much deliberation
Shadow and I decision had reached
you may rant;  you may rave
do the Mexican wave
yet still be punished for my rules you have breached.

"The imagineries and Hubbard
to inhabit the cupboard
access to my head is forever denied
you skeletons will hoard 
keep my secrets well-stored
in my head where you henceforth will reside."

There's no happy ever after
my world is now dafter
cramped, the skeletons keep knotting their chains
with more space at hand
my imaginary band
multiplied.  I'm now doubly insane

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sanders Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 2:29 PM
Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm a fan
White Avatar
July 24, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Haha, you are thoroughly cracked and I love it. I have never read something so impossibly posible. Smiles
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 11:14 AM
both super Delysia, great stuff xx
Bordner Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Sophisticated language in this write Delysia - powerful lesson of trust and cooperation - J.A.B. %
Anglesey Avatar
May 19, 2013 at 10:40 AM
You take the reader on a most insanely wild journey. The theme and imagery combined created a fantastic experience for the reader. Exceptional !
Burns Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 8:52 PM
You have done it again, fascinated me with your whimsical words. fine poetry. Thanks for your visit to hillbilly hand jive.
Onclaud Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 1:44 PM
Fascinating plots,licia... reminds me of Steven Spielberg's series , Amazing Stories... great job, you wordsmith! : ) huggs
A   Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Hello Delysia, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 4:22 AM
Great rhythm, rhyme and flow to this work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Those things in the cupboard well I would be afraid to open mine..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 10:40 AM
Both 're great... well done~A.O
Carrillo Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Great work and Congratulations on the win. Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
Lamoureux Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 11:44 AM
good morning, thanks for your morning visit.
Seal Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:31 PM
This deserves congrats on both pages Delysia, well done. Take care, Richard
Sibanda Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 2:41 PM
Cute piece. It is right to write...
Jerden Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Hey Delsyia, great poem. The rhyming scheme is one I use a lot myself, however, I combine lines 1&2 and 4&5 so that it forms an internal rhyme, then you are left with 4 lines per stanza instead of six. Makes for easier reading, I think. Also, if you have multiple parts, post them in reverse order. That way they show up in order on your page. Love it! Cheers, Roy
Fraser Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Sometimes there's no truce in that war, very well done, blessings Carl
Seal Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Have re-read, have to stop now though, I don't em latching onto me, toooo susceptible lol
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 12:46 PM
Gah awesome dark poem! D well rhymed narrative leaves us spellbound to d end. Kudos.
Van Breda Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 1:33 AM
Good morning-- our side of the world. Just checking my inbox, and read through your 'hostile head takeover 2'-- I enjoyed reading how the 'battle' continued-- those people in our heads-- past skeletons we endeavour to keep in chains.... they normally win and break free eventually. Very clever poem.
A   Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 7:52 PM
It is amazing and crazy... i love the second part a bit more... A very clever and entertaining poem... always~ Linda
Tacito Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 1:18 PM
A fantastic sequel to the 1st! Embrace the insanity! All normal people do it. ;) Excellent job!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 6:45 AM
oh boy have you been in my head recently this so sums things up for me I am on your wave length.. brilliant love it xx
Jordan Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 9:33 PM
Fantastic! What a tale you've created, with voices, skeletons, bones and cupboards. I'm going to have to read both parts again, maybe more than once... Jack
Omara Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 6:39 PM
And just as funny as Part 1. Hope we don't wait as long for your next posting.-Red
Seal Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 4:18 PM
Excellent write, though I thought you were already doubly insane lol, great story, your writing is fantastic. Take care, Richard
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