Hostage In Darkness

Hostage in Darkness

I lie in the darkness for you are not  here
I need to dream so I can persevere
I see in my dream the blackness prevail
Your deepset dark eyes and your ebony hair
And breath of your complexion bathed in sweet brown

Recalling the times we walked hand in hand
A garden of lilies along the land
Your body contrasting the white lighted hue

Then you left me one day and the colors withdrew
Dark shades of lament and the sad loss of you
Eerie and fearful I cannot deter
What lit up our love is now a dense blur
I wallow in black in a grayish dun
Perchance I will see your face in the sun 

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September 19, 2017
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Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 9:47 PM
A beautiful and captivating write Ralph. Lovely lines of emotion and imagery so poetically expressed in a deep and poignant way. Your write touched my mind, heart and soul... Enjoyed!
Cresswell Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Ralph is this based in fiction? if not it makes me even sadder.
Sergi Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Hi Pat: It is based on fiction.
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 8:10 PM
I really like your take on "in the dark" with the sadness you added to this lost love poetry. Love it, Ralph.
Warrior Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 10:31 AM
A darkness I can relate to...excellent entry, my friend...best of luck, although I smell a winner...god bless...^WW^
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Feel the dark in your poem--well described--best wishes Ralph for a win!
Sergi Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Thank you, Vijay
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