Sand Blown Poet Free verse

hospital-at-tea

finally out at last...
spent seven 'daze'
in the hospital...
was blacking out
collapsing in a haze...
an 'imp' proved 
to be bacterial...
noticeably better now
glad to be back...

stan lee

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Michelle Smith June 19, 2024 at 8:23 PM hope you're feeling better and take good care of yourself... life is good... stay healthy :) ...neat how you separate words and sounds :O

David Smith May 21, 2024 at 1:00 PM While I never blacked out bacteria caused issues around my cancer but I have been Five years back. Glad you are back to write more poetry. Regards David in NZ Sand Blown May 22, 2024 at 9:41 AM ....thanks for the comment man.....have a good't day : ) ........fifty five years ago me and a friend stopped in NZ on our way to australia for a year..........stan

Sara Kendrick May 18, 2024 at 9:07 AM Glad to hear it, Stan Lee. I hope they found the culprit that was causing the problem, and you are well at last. Sara K Sand Blown May 18, 2024 at 2:41 PM ....bacterial infection.....nice to be back to normal : ) .....stan

Deb M May 4, 2024 at 4:14 PM Oh no sounds awful S.B …..hope you are healing quickly! Take care…Debx Sand Blown May 4, 2024 at 6:39 PM Sand Blown May 4, 2024 at 5:44 PM hey how ya do'in....things are slow but quite better.....stan