Hospital Visitor

She whispered in my ear of neon lights, 
my mother,celebrated actress,
waning star in sick bay,
zany bird nest hairstyle on display,
lock and tress erect,
skin-fold ripple eggshell pallor,
mothball end play flutter from the wings.
I, devoted sibling, reluctant hospital visitor,
now bearing doleful witness,
to the voice that once enthralled a thousand hearts, 
with oral feats and seismic tone-shifts,
like someone trying to catch a friend’s attention on an outbound train,
now tragic downturn ache.
Apple walnut salad only deli window fodder in her eyes,
Dijon mustard sachet cast aside as if unwanted email spam,
get well cards cut paper dragon trails.
Nightingales of tender years and warmth who nurse in rosters,
slowly spread those deathly forms right underneath an icon’s split chin rash.
Whiff of starchy clerk and file procedure hovers over gridlock wards,
private health insurance an albatross of waiver in that very human passing out parade.
Yet here I am, son and heir, entr’acte  curator of maternal legend’s skyward exit,
tummy rumble moment where impromptu has the edge on solemn plot,
as one walks on stage hoping not to freeze.
The one true screen test all
must face dear mum would say,
before our sip from life’s rich cup becomes a stain upon the twilight bow of curtains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 4:45 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I am now wondering where there's a deli that serves a fresh apple salad. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 5:00 AM
Many thanks, Sara, for your time, visit and comments. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 12:34 PM
Great free verse. Howard. A belated Congrats to you on your marathon win
Goldsmith Avatar
June 26, 2022 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Son And Heir" is a Creative write. Today, be blessed with your win...........
Toney Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 9:12 PM
Howard, this was a very different yet intriguing read for me. Your word choice is unique and very appropriate for the circumstances being described. Congratulations on your win on Mile 4 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 5 has already started!
Kerr Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 9:52 PM
Mark, I’m flattered by your generous review of my work and of course the selection which I will cherish always Thank you so much for considering my work and the time involved. Best wishes Howard
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