Hospital Hill

On the dock upon the hill
there your stance is very still
you seem as dazed if taking pills
you tilt your head and there you spill
dive in the water your thoughts no will
luckily no breakage for there is sill
you are shivering but you have no chill
your body is heavy but you float like a quill
it's nice to not notice your own mind is ill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 30, 2009 at 8:16 PM
how cool is this monorhyme!!!! expertly done! Jessica! with an intense twist at the end! perfect! new fav poet and poem! and thanks for queuing me with a comment! thats how I find cool poets like you!!! jimbo
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