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Hospital Hill

On the dock upon the hill there your stance is very still you seem as dazed if taking pills you tilt your head and there you spill dive in the water your thoughts no will luckily no breakage for there is sill you are shivering but you have no chill your body is heavy but you float like a quill it's nice to not notice your own mind is ill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/30/2009 8:16:00 PM
how cool is this monorhyme!!!! expertly done! Jessica! with an intense twist at the end! perfect! new fav poet and poem! and thanks for queuing me with a comment! thats how I find cool poets like you!!! jimbo
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