Hospital

Everything went silent 
The monitors and doctors panicked voices 
everything went dead
I knew I was dying 
The first night is the worst
Doctors not knowing if you'll really make it
Stress levels rising
Hearts breaking
Tears being cried all over the country in my name
Pressure rising 
Everything went quiet
As I stopped to breathe
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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April 23, 2017 at 2:14 AM
Beautiful Free Verse you have written here, about a terrifying situation.... Have you been in this situation yourself? I myself can relate to this very much. Welcome to PoetrySoup
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April 23, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Yes I have
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