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My horse and I go galloping

We reach a water puddle

Thinks its more than a little thing

Kicks up and gets all startled


I slowly climb off his back

He tugs free and gallops off

Thinks he to be a poor sap

'Tis a whirlpool sees to cross


Date: 05/27/2019
Re-edited: 05/28/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/28/2019 5:52:00 PM
cute little story poem, William
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Date: 5/28/2019 6:19:00 PM
A jittery beast, though they naturally flinch to shoo away flies, or ones touch--thanks, Aloha wk

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