Horses

Competition day had arrived,
His muzzle twitched with anticipation
And in relation my feet tingled in a way like never before.
For the first time, we both doubted ourselves

But fear not, we must carry on
As I plaited his forelock in preparation 
I took the time to appreciate how flat his withers was
How typically racehorse he was
I stroked his fetlock as I knew this could be it.

His hooves were oiled and shiny as ever
Ready for anything
And the 3 link that he loved
Made no difference in poll pressure
As we bolt across the course, aiming to be the best

“I trust you, boy”
As if to tell him that even though, 2 years ago when he was deemed
A mess with dodgy hocks and lumpy coronets
Who was a waste
He could do this, to prove them wrong and beat the best
Become the best
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
July 10, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gasun Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Wow! This is amazing my dear friend, Gabby. Congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers!
Nayak Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Dear Gabby, wonderful write on horses and grooming him for the race !Congrats on your great win!!! //love,Anu:)
Daniel Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:23 AM
This is simply great, Gabby:) wonderful free verse:) Congratulations on your win:)
May Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Congrats on your win!
Scars Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 7:02 AM
great job Gabby! congrats on your placement :) -luloo
A   Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Well said, Gabby...pd
Brock Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 12:51 PM
I love this!! <3
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