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Horses

My life seems to last forever now that I’ve start aging The sudden onset aches and pains start engaging My home is in a theme park petting zoo where other animals live and rest Each day zoo attendants feed, water, and groom us to look our best for our guests These little creatures called Children come into the petting zoo With the sounds of ooohs, aaahs of surprise as they walk through Sheep, goats, rabbits, to feed and interact physically with safety Some of these little creatures try to chase me, some of us get shaky A tall creature with a long mane and forelock yells, “Wait a minute baby!” Is this tall creature going to save me? A young pony, a true friend is 7 hands at the wither not as tall as me Wearing a blanket and saddle for a rider to sit, and bridle to guide in safety Zoo attendants teach the proper ways to handle animals while brushing my forelock, poll, croup, and withers They lift my gaskin the area behind my leg between the stifle and hock pointing to my fetlock explaining that is actually more like the ball of the foot on a human Naming my coronet where it meets my hoof down to my frog; a highly elastic wedge-shaped mass on the underside of the hoof and supports both locomotion and circulation When all is done the attendant extending a hand placing a treat close to my muzzle treating us with love and kindness, as we bubble full of admiration
10/20/2016 Horses - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton use the following words Muzzle, forelock, fetlock, hock, withers, stifle, poll, croup, gaskin, frog, hoof and coronet.
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Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 2:59 PM
I love your personification and the way you used those words, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Gasun Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:49 AM
Wow! This is such amazing my dear friend, Eve. I love it so much! You did yours so well, too. Congratulations on your great win! Hugs and cheers!
Nayak Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Dear Eve, wonderful write on anatomy of horses with a lovely picture of zoo !Congrats on your great win!!! //love,Anu:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 11:14 PM
You did a fantastic job on this entry Eve. Big Congratulations on your super win! 7 ; )
Flower Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:40 PM
A well-thought-out write. Congrats on your win. Eve. ;)
Daniel Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Well written from the point of view of the horse himself:) Congratulations on your win, Eve:)
May Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on a fine win Eve
Scars Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 7:02 AM
amazing poem for an amazing lady :) congrats on your placement :) -luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Loved your personification poem and its location. You set up the story, then instructed the children about the upkeep of horses. Very nice. Congrats, Eve!
Y. Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Hi Eve, You did a great job. It was though the horse really was speaking. I enjoyed what the horse had to say. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:05 PM
Thank you, Alexis, I am glad you felt like the horse was talking just the action I wanted.... I do love the inspiration :) Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 12:52 PM
eve, you have a wide knowledge about horses... ohh, so well woven and wonderfully quilled..huggs
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Thank you, Nette, .... I have no knowledge just the mind of a child and research.. I do love the inspiration :) Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 7:14 AM
Awesome ... a sure win ...
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:03 PM
Thank you, Probir.... I do love the inspiration :) Hugs Eve
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