Horseplay

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Two horses talking in a field one day One said to the other "let's run away" "But where would we sleep" "And what would we eat" "Under the stars, eat? I just wanna play. So they galloped off as quick as they could And in a wood they found a cosy nook Hitherto, the pair Launched a love affair There stood in the wood hooves were stirred and shook. Consequentially came a little foal A most handsome colt to make their world whole Then came another And many other A herd with no population control.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/2/2020 1:32:00 PM

These are brilliant Belle, well composed, I never wrote one until I joined soup. Tom

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/2/2020 1:41:00 PM

Thank you Tom, I love limericks and that includes yours, they’re great... Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 11/2/2020 11:27:00 AM

what a fun string of limericks:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/1/2020 8:39:00 PM

Can you imagine? No population control! Hmph! What would Malthus say?! lol. Thanks for the chuckle, Belle! :) gw

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/2/2020 12:30:00 AM

Gershon, I’m so glad the lims on a string gave you a chuckle, I can’t imagine what Malthus would have to say. Must add that the limericks are just horseplay, that I love and adore horses as much as I love night and day... Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/1/2020 11:58:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this one. It lightens the atmosphere. Thanks for dropping by my page. If you care to read the rest of my poem and my answer to your comment feel free to do so. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/1/2020 2:13:00 PM

Thank you Sara, I will read the rest of your poem... Belle