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Horseplay

Two horses talking in a field one day One said to the other "let's run away" "But where would we sleep" "And what would we eat" "Under the stars, eat? I just wanna play. So they galloped off as quick as they could And in a wood they found a cosy nook Hitherto, the pair Launched a love affair There stood in the wood hooves were stirred and shook. Consequentially came a little foal A most handsome colt to make their world whole Then came another And many other A herd with no population control.
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Cunningham Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 1:32 PM
These are brilliant Belle, well composed, I never wrote one until I joined soup. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Tom, I love limericks and that includes yours, they’re great... Belle
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 11:27 AM
what a fun string of limericks:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Can you imagine? No population control! Hmph! What would Malthus say?! lol. Thanks for the chuckle, Belle! :) gw
Edmonds  Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 12:30 AM
Gershon, I’m so glad the lims on a string gave you a chuckle, I can’t imagine what Malthus would have to say. Must add that the limericks are just horseplay, that I love and adore horses as much as I love night and day... Belle
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 11:58 AM
Enjoyed reading this one. It lightens the atmosphere. Thanks for dropping by my page. If you care to read the rest of my poem and my answer to your comment feel free to do so. Sara
Edmonds  Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Sara, I will read the rest of your poem... Belle
One Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 8:36 AM
Loved your limericks Belle...
Edmonds  Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 8:54 AM
Thank you Silent One, I appreciate that... Belle:-)
Kaufman Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:21 AM
Hi Belle, I loved your limerick about horses..I personally find them very spiritual animals..Nancy
Edmonds  Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 1:59 PM
So sorry I missed your comments back then. Thank you… Belle
Y. Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Hi Belle, I found string of limericks about horses, very romantic. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Edmonds  Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:09 AM
Thank you Alexis, a string of lims, that’s a good expression to put into use on occasion, I like it... have a wonderful day as well, Belle :-)
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