''Horse Drawn Dreams''

Daddy bought me a filly named ''Champagne Taste''.
Smitten by the thought someday she would race.
Slender,sleek,course mane.
Shaped as elegant as a European statuette.
I trained,coached her every move.
Her strength with age continued to improve.
Thoroughbred beauty,your lifetime of wins.
Memories still remain in our trophy case.
Beloved horse I could never replace.



''A Horse Story'' Poetry Contest
sponsored by...Carol Brown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Eastman Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Interesting write that brings so many images to mind. Well done.
Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Kacey, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Foulk Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 12:04 PM
love horses, my dad had one it was pure black except for this white mark by his nose, beautiful horse. loved horse racing i use to go a lot. you must have been proud. and congratons. on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:30 PM
Oh, yes, the beautiful "imagined" horse! I sure remember this poem and congratulations, my friend.
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Congrats on your win, Kacey. Excellent piece. Great write. Ralph
Horne Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 2:36 PM
Many congrats on your win, Kacey: )
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:45 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Kacey
Sweetheart Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:57 PM
Congrats Kacey on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. great adventure of fond memories..enjoy..
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Kacey. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Awwwww. How sweet this horse named Champagne Taste. Carol will surely enjoy your entry here, Kaycee..Used to have a lil pet horse named Snack Pack...a dapple gray....they are the most magnificent of creatures! Enjoyed reading your work here this morning. Gwendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 10:09 AM
such a lovely poem and a lovely name for this grand horse Kacey.. excellent visual so vibrant luv..good luck in the contest.. appreciate your wonderful critique on my entry too ...enjoy..
Long Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 5:13 PM
This is well written I have enjoyed your poem tonight. cory
Greenlee Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 6:41 PM
Thanks Cory.You never know what you are gonna get from me hehe.I'll be reading your stuff soon my dear...Kacey
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 4:01 PM
It sounds like a true story. You had such a horse? I wish I had one to write about. I have no horse tales to tell!! You did wonderfully with yours!
Greenlee Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 4:39 PM
No,not a true story.But was inspired because I had always dreamed of a horse like the one I described.I know how you feel having not had a real horse.Oh well we have our imaginations...Thanks for the comment Andrea.Sincerely,Kacey
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