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~ I am your craving ... you devour me like madness, as I plunge ... your eyes ~ (This did not place in the "Sexyku" Poetry Contest)

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Date: 11/6/2019 7:43:00 AM

The boldness of looking into your lover’s eyes... nicely done!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/9/2019 5:33:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Kim, I'm so pleased that you liked it ... my sexiest haiku by far. Back to the drawing board! ;o) <3

Date: 11/6/2019 7:36:00 AM

Her eyes, a blue million miles. Beautifully done. xomo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/9/2019 5:31:00 PM

Many kind thanks to you, Mo, it is so appreciated. Blessings! :o) <3

Date: 11/6/2019 7:23:00 AM

People with amazing eyes are very attractive... Bless you with a win, Gina

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/9/2019 5:31:00 PM

Nope, clearly not the judge's idea of sexy ... but thank you so much, Regina, your comment is my win. Blessings! :o) <3