Gregory Richard Barden Poet Haiku

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~     I am your craving ...


                          you devour me like madness,


          as I plunge ... your eyes     ~






(This did not place in the "Sexyku" Poetry Contest)

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Kim Rodrigues November 6, 2019 at 7:43 AM The boldness of looking into your lover’s eyes... nicely done! Gregory Richard Barden November 9, 2019 at 5:33 PM Thank you so very much, Kim, I'm so pleased that you liked it ... my sexiest haiku by far. Back to the drawing board! ;o) <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 6, 2019 at 7:36 AM Her eyes, a blue million miles. Beautifully done. xomo Gregory Richard Barden November 9, 2019 at 5:31 PM Many kind thanks to you, Mo, it is so appreciated. Blessings! :o) <3

Regina Mcintosh November 6, 2019 at 7:23 AM People with amazing eyes are very attractive... Bless you with a win, Gina Gregory Richard Barden November 9, 2019 at 5:31 PM Nope, clearly not the judge's idea of sexy ... but thank you so much, Regina, your comment is my win. Blessings! :o) <3