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Horrorscope

In your eyes, see Galaxies
(And the Soul's vast constellations)
A need to fill self-prophecy,
To seek my own self-validation!
To Orion's Belt, by Pisces Fin,
I strive to change myself again...
Polaris guides to Leo's Pride-
But Scorpio hath pierced my skin!

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/2/2013 2:24:00 PM - A clever and interesting poem - do you reading horoscopes ? - I'm LION ..... what tells the lion you ? - Have a nice weekend J.T.A. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/3/2013 10:13:00 AM Hi, Anne Lise; I do enjoy horoscopes and astrology. I'm a Gemini. I have had many good friends who are Leo's; I know you all are a loyal bunch. Thanks for the read and reply! :)

Carol Eastman Date: 11/2/2013 1:55:00 PM I'm a Scorpio, too... Very imaginative write... Quite brilliant actually... Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/2/2013 2:08:00 PM Thank you for the kind words, Carol; much appreciated, always :)

Poet. Undertaker Date: 11/1/2013 8:52:00 PM Hey! I know....I know.....how did you know I'm a Scorpio? Mr.Just! your works are Just! (: )Jenish. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/2/2013 8:09:00 AM I hope that's a good thing; thanks for reading, Jenish.

Delysia Hendricks Date: 11/1/2013 7:51:00 PM Ouch!! I hope you've over the sting by now. Lovely poetry, as ever, TAP. Licia :-) Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/2/2013 8:12:00 AM Oh, yeah; the ex was a loooong time ago, but my bf still stings me from time to time. Thanks so much, D :)

Robin Davis Date: 11/1/2013 7:20:00 PM Chan The Man This is creative and unique. Hey you put pisces in there. Thats me. A fishy. LOL Nice job my friend. Hugs and Love Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/2/2013 8:11:00 AM Glad you enjoyed, Sweet Pea! <3

Karen Anglesey Date: 11/1/2013 7:19:00 PM Ouch! for Scorpio... I am Leo and remain unscathed.... I love this one and having a great time just reading your newest titles :) Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/2/2013 8:10:00 AM Thanks, K; glad you're back <3

Wilson Mapfumo Date: 11/1/2013 2:51:00 PM brief but with a heavily laden with expert word play.my kind of stuff.not bad.. Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/1/2013 4:06:00 PM Thanks for the read and reply :)

Joseph Matose Date: 11/1/2013 12:29:00 PM A I enjoyed the pun in your title. I'm a Scorpio too. Thanks for sharing. Friend, JM Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/1/2013 1:03:00 PM Thanks as always for the review, my friend! My best friend of 20 years and my ex-boyfriend are Scorpio's so that last line is about them ;)

Sandra Adams Date: 11/1/2013 11:34:00 AM i like your play on words in this piece... the signs seem to have something to do with the course of our lives, so some say...good write :) Login to Reply Just That Archaic Poet Date: 11/1/2013 12:19:00 PM Thanks for the read and reply, Sandra; much appreciated :)