Horrible Horrible Ghost Story

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Horrible Horrible Ghost Story She Only Loved Dancing Music But Didn't Have Meat. -Gray Squirrel 05-17-2025

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Gray Squirrel

Date: 5/18/2025 6:28:00 PM

It's more serious than that, as a ghost, she, by definition, lacked any hardware or workable software..

Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/18/2025 6:51:00 PM

Well, I mean, she's not real... she's just made up... does it help to imagine she's not?

Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/18/2025 6:44:00 PM

No fluid: no sound; no ears: no hearing; no legs or muscles, no beat; no rhythm, no motion, no brain, no cells, no subparticle parts. No wisdom, no awareness, no art. Wait... let's not get ahead of ourselves... I know what she's missing, but not exactly what's left, love.

Tom Woody

Date: 5/17/2025 12:54:00 PM

Vegan ghost? Why not

Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/17/2025 2:48:00 PM

She wasn't made out of meat anymore... awwww.