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I sensed this feeling grasp me, undefined The instant that her lips had shaped a smile And when she spoke my name, it magnified To find its proper place within my mind It seemed to center in my chest as warm Then radiating out, (quite quickly south) Thus energizing bone and flesh the same Completely hushing each intrinsic storm It was a sense that I'd not known before An innervation daubed with impish hopes So with my tongue tied uselessly in knots The chaos in my head was howling ... "MORE!" ~ 6th Place ~ in the "An Uplifting Feeling" Poetry Contest, Line Gauthier, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/3/2019 10:19:00 PM
Uplifting and humorous! Congrats!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/27/2019 10:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 5/30/2019 11:46:00 AM
Well done, Gregory! Hope they are not misguided Wish you well in the contest!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/30/2019 8:17:00 PM
Many thanks, Ralph ... I hope you're right! Blessings, my friend! :-)

Book: Shattered Sighs