Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

Horizons

Panda Bear adorns horizon
For one brief minute
Then Great Blue Heron came on
Suddenly a rabbit

Mom would say wild imagination
Only in cobalt blue
I really saw all these captions
Now they're gone it is true

The golden sun dominates scene
Those animals seem but dream
Life is here now warming up alive
Mist rises from creek jive

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Josie Whitehead May 27, 2012 at 12:27 AM Oh Sara - I thought I was the only one who saw visions in the clouds, ha ha Your poem is really lovely. Always keep the child inside you alive as you are doing here. Beautiful.

Richard Palmer May 23, 2012 at 5:17 AM wild imagination,like it Sara

Russell Sivey May 22, 2012 at 6:31 PM Wow, this is a truly fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed the imagination and thoughts you have! What a joyful and loving poem! Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2012 at 4:58 PM a vibrant picture with fantastic images flowing in every line Sara.. we have a small brown rabbit who likes to play with our puppies.. what a treat to vieww luv as this piece is..

Phyllis Babcock May 22, 2012 at 2:19 PM I love to watch the clouds on the horizon and pick out shapes. Enjoyed your poem. love phyl

Jack Horne May 22, 2012 at 1:47 PM Yes, I've often imagined shapes in the mist or in clouds - lovely fun write

Nette Onclaud May 22, 2012 at 1:32 PM love the cloud scenes, sara, and the way you put the images together to create a tender hint of imagination... re my haiku, i'm second-guessing as i can't excatly fathom joe's hidden meaning... best of luck and huggs! :)