Horizons

Panda Bear adorns horizon For one brief minute Then Great Blue Heron came on Suddenly a rabbit Mom would say wild imagination Only in cobalt blue I really saw all these captions Now they're gone it is true The golden sun dominates scene Those animals seem but dream Life is here now warming up alive Mist rises from creek jive

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Josie Whitehead

Date: 5/27/2012 12:27:00 AM

Oh Sara - I thought I was the only one who saw visions in the clouds, ha ha Your poem is really lovely. Always keep the child inside you alive as you are doing here. Beautiful.

Richard Palmer

Date: 5/23/2012 5:17:00 AM

wild imagination,like it Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/22/2012 6:31:00 PM

Wow, this is a truly fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed the imagination and thoughts you have! What a joyful and loving poem! Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2012 4:58:00 PM

a vibrant picture with fantastic images flowing in every line Sara.. we have a small brown rabbit who likes to play with our puppies.. what a treat to vieww luv as this piece is..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/22/2012 2:19:00 PM

I love to watch the clouds on the horizon and pick out shapes. Enjoyed your poem. love phyl

Jack Horne

Date: 5/22/2012 1:47:00 PM

Yes, I've often imagined shapes in the mist or in clouds - lovely fun write

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/22/2012 1:32:00 PM

love the cloud scenes, sara, and the way you put the images together to create a tender hint of imagination... re my haiku, i'm second-guessing as i can't excatly fathom joe's hidden meaning... best of luck and huggs! :)