Horizons

Sitting with the sun
In my face. A warming glow.
Drenching me in light,
I feel connected to you.
Facing towards horizons

For contest 'five lines down'
2nd place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 6:04 AM
Congratulations on your win with this excellent work..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Emma. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:42 PM
Congratulations Emma on a big win here. enjoy the glory with this well deserved one
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 12:38 AM
awesome win, emma.VEry pretty.
Buckeridge Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Thank you Andrea x
Mehta Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Emma
Buckeridge Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Hi Thanks for your kind words. I've been trying to find where the contest results were so I can leave a few kind words myself, but can't see where the contest results page went? Any ideas where it went :o)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Congrats Emma on your super win in Brian's contest with this dynamic poem.. enjoy luv..
Buckeridge Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 11:35 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments, I can't see where the results age went tho!
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 1:48 PM
I really like this on, Emma. I always am "drawn to the sun" and poems about it!
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Nice expressions on Horizons, Emma
Foulk Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 11:59 AM
a beautiful Tanka, warm and tender. loved reading it.
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