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Hoping For a Fix

the cockroaches had been disturbed They were running out from under her nightgown on to the gurney the firemen were holding. Where were they coming from? The corpulent woman pretended not to notice knowing they had been living in her fat rolls She was glad their dark haven had been violated Maybe when she got to the hospital someone would fix her She had been living in the dark with these creatures for a long time

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Date: 3/8/2021 7:45:00 AM
I always enjoy your writes. Your pen was working over time on this one. Funny and sad at the same time. Have a blessed day/week writing away.............
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2021 11:06:00 PM
Thank you; this unfortunately is a true story.
Date: 3/7/2021 3:26:00 PM
Imagine the poor hospital workers having to search through the lairs of flab for cockroaches, where on earth did this one come from Caren, very creative in a morbid way, cheers David
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/8/2021 11:06:00 PM
This is a true story, so it was not difficult to construct, David. I just followed what I heard from several people.

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