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Hopes and Dreams Fade the Same

my dreams
tethered
on a string
of thoughts

hope flickers
beneath 
clouded mind

wishes adrift
falling fast
on trails
of stars

then fading
within night

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/15/2019 10:38:00 AM

My friend, your pen inks its gifts with grace and inspiring words that reveal a true poet painting on an artistic wall of in a Valhalla of poetic heroes.... A fav.. especially love the , " then fading within night", brilliant closing verse!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Robert... all hopes and dreams fade with the night and then rise with the light of a new day :) hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/15/2019 10:12:00 AM

Another wonderful write. Love to you sweet lady, And prayers and blessings too... Gina

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 11:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina :) blessings and hugs to you ...

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/15/2019 9:51:00 AM

in the trail your pen painted beautifully sandra we always live in hope

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 9:53:00 AM

hope and dreams...the foundation of life... thank you :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/15/2019 7:20:00 AM

Thankfully the sunrise is bringing a new day where those hopes and dreams can be revived and this could be the day they come true. Loved this my friend, kind of somber but still filled with hopes and dreams.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 9:54:00 AM

each day should flourish with hopes and dreams, even if they fade each night... thank you my friend :) hugs