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Hopes and Dreams Fade the Same

my dreams tethered on a string of thoughts hope flickers beneath clouded mind wishes adrift falling fast on trails of stars then fading within night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/15/2019 10:38:00 AM
My friend, your pen inks its gifts with grace and inspiring words that reveal a true poet painting on an artistic wall of in a Valhalla of poetic heroes.... A fav.. especially love the , " then fading within night", brilliant closing verse!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Robert... all hopes and dreams fade with the night and then rise with the light of a new day :) hugs
Date: 10/15/2019 10:12:00 AM
Another wonderful write. Love to you sweet lady, And prayers and blessings too... Gina
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Date: 10/15/2019 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Gina :) blessings and hugs to you ...
Date: 10/15/2019 9:51:00 AM
in the trail your pen painted beautifully sandra we always live in hope
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 9:53:00 AM
hope and dreams...the foundation of life... thank you :) hugs
Date: 10/15/2019 7:20:00 AM
Thankfully the sunrise is bringing a new day where those hopes and dreams can be revived and this could be the day they come true. Loved this my friend, kind of somber but still filled with hopes and dreams.
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:54:00 AM
each day should flourish with hopes and dreams, even if they fade each night... thank you my friend :) hugs
Date: 10/15/2019 6:55:00 AM
Sometimes it feels that way..so much said in just a few words, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Vijay....my muse was inspired by the allure of the sky last night...hugs :)
Date: 10/14/2019 10:19:00 PM
I get this melancholy piece. Nice penning, my friend...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend.... :) hugs
Date: 10/14/2019 10:09:00 PM
Lovely, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/15/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs

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