Hopes and Dreams Fade the Same

my dreams
tethered
on a string
of thoughts

hope flickers
beneath 
clouded mind

wishes adrift
falling fast
on trails
of stars

then fading
within night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lindley Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:38 AM
My friend, your pen inks its gifts with grace and inspiring words that reveal a true poet painting on an artistic wall of in a Valhalla of poetic heroes.... A fav.. especially love the , " then fading within night", brilliant closing verse!
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thank you Robert... all hopes and dreams fade with the night and then rise with the light of a new day :) hugs
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Another wonderful write. Love to you sweet lady, And prayers and blessings too... Gina
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thank you so much Gina :) blessings and hugs to you ...
Mcdaid Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:51 AM
in the trail your pen painted beautifully sandra we always live in hope
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:53 AM
hope and dreams...the foundation of life... thank you :) hugs
Green Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Thankfully the sunrise is bringing a new day where those hopes and dreams can be revived and this could be the day they come true. Loved this my friend, kind of somber but still filled with hopes and dreams.
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:54 AM
each day should flourish with hopes and dreams, even if they fade each night... thank you my friend :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 6:55 AM
Sometimes it feels that way..so much said in just a few words, Sandy.
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Thank you Vijay....my muse was inspired by the allure of the sky last night...hugs :)
There Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 10:19 PM
I get this melancholy piece. Nice penning, my friend...
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so much my friend.... :) hugs
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Lovely, Sandra.
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Thank you so much Line :) hugs
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