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hopes

                   blue or pink beats fast
~magical wrapped hopes growing~
life will open eyes
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Rodgers Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Dear Maria, You have wonderfully encapsulated the wondrous anticipation and boundless hope accompanying the journey of parenthood. I loved how the simplicity of your language belies the depth of emotion and significance behind each word. Maria, this is a beautiful reflection on the miracle of life and the joy of new beginnings. - Blessings, Daniel
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Thank you so much, dear Daniel for your always kind words. I hope you have a great afternoon. Blessings!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 9:31 PM
Perfect vision that imparts hope. Great haiku.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 12:45 AM
Thank you very much Victor. Blessings!
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 5:41 PM
Dear Maria, your poem about the fleeting beauty and eternity of life is truly superb. It conveys the essence of hope. This poem is incredibly brittle, brimming with supple metaphors.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 12:46 AM
Thank you very much dear Sotto. Have a great week!
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